August Lanes Comments

beautiful n soothing write. keep it up

enjoyed reading this poem! ! !

where sun sets with the same beauty of death, ................ A poem with an exquisite beauty...............

Absolutely stunning imagery...impressive! You take the reader on an unknown uncharted journey...dipping and bobbing; in and out of reality and hallucination.... an odyssey of sorts…the similitude is superb the rendering fine as silk, woven in gossamer finesse. Time filters through it as shaded rays of light…..its not often, poetry touches one like dat. Great job….! ! ! Cheers sat