August Hands Comments

I'm lovin' it

very nicely written it is written in the stars whatever will be will be

........imagery gives life to this poem...........you are truly wonderful write.................I invite you to read.....To bosom thee.I'll rise......and comment your views...

this is excellently written, great job

It is true we are ghost Till we leave the earth Evaporate Leaving a shadow That will melt... Lorraine you have endless imagination... Write and run through without exhaustion... But your name is too long for me to learn I will call 'Lorraine without exhaustion...'

You're a very talented writer, Lorraine. This is excellent and a pleasure to read. Your imagery paints such wonderful pictures in the mind. Warmest regards, CJ Heck

As is written in the stars The vessel is bound to land Mirrored the return of an image Your ghost plays Destiny's hand. tht was my fav part :)

Hi Lorraine. Thank you so much for reading my poems and I appreciate your oopinion. It gave me some confidence. Just read 'August Hands'. Your choice of words was excellent. A great read. Some day I hope I will be as good as you! ! !

beautiful......well done

Bravo! everything about this was nice. Your use of words excellent, the flow grand and your rhyme perfect. Great write: -)

Hi Lorraine. A very interesting read and most enjoyable well done Regards Dave T.

Excellent poem.A full 10 for you.

really great and wonderful poem full of the golden meanings I really enjoyed it Thanks a lot

That last line really comes across with pizazzzzzzzzzz