Tuesday, September 22, 2009

August Afternoon Comments

Rating: 5.0

The yard reposes,
weighty and lethargic,
in the torrid afternoon.
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B. V. Dahlen
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Sylvia 03 May 2019

Bea I really liked this poem. It created a picture in words, it also made me actually able to feel the afternoon. Well done!

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Ruth Walters 14 June 2012

Beautiful images flood the mind as I read this Bea....you have a way with words.... Ruthie: o)

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Jean Dament 25 October 2009

Great imagery takes us into a summer scene with you. I enjoyed this one. 'pedals'-should be 'petals' ok Ravensong

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B. V. Dahlen

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