Tuesday, September 1, 2015

August,2015 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bidding farewell to you, I assure you August,
I shall remain acknowledged, yes, I must,
For someone you were month of lust,
But for me an inspiration and trust!
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COMMENTS
Bisma Mirza 02 September 2015

Wow..... Beautiful one....10 on 10! !

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Savita Tyagi 01 September 2015

Beautiful poem. Loved the rhythm and richness of story. There are days and months that mean a lot to us. Each of those moments are precious no matter how old we get.

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Khalida Bano Ali 01 September 2015

A different and unique poem..................................10

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Kelly Kurt 01 September 2015

I hope there will be many more Augusts for you, Akhtar. May September bring your heart to contentment

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Sanjukta Nag 01 September 2015

The poem has marvellous rhyming with philosophical touches. wonderful work.10+

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Akhtar Jawad

Akhtar Jawad

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