August 15th Comments

Beautiful poem. I loved reading the way you portrayed our motherland. very true said, My name is India Celebrate today as independent day Every year in delight…… Thank you Sir, for many inspiring comments for my poem. Thanks a lot.

the day was asleep The world was asleep But the night was awake Stars were awake......................nice

Fantastic thought and description. I liked it.

Enjoyed this song of joy of Mother India.... enumerating her struggles under an alien rule and how oneday, when the whole world was asleep, she woke to freedom shattering the manacles of slavery! Enjoyed this first hand narration, Deepak!

fragrance of independence, good writing, thanks,