August 14 Comments
Looking down from the roof-top of the same place
Cars, shouts, fights, decaying trees...
Nothing's changed, my dear
It is the second year and he is still singing his non tamo pius'
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beautiful sweet wishes.. deserved attention and sure the high score..10+++
The sentiment expressed in the poem comes through, but little else. I'm not even sure of its meaning. The structure is not the best, and it leaves a lot of places where mistakes can and are made. I cannot recommend it for that reason. GW62
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11/4/2025 10:59:14 PM # 1.0.0
It comes straight from heart and how it swirls, turns, pirouettes and finally a rut on your forehead till its tabbed and shared …. I’m not here to judge you I’m here to collect pollens of sentiments and see its fruition in my work. That’s what its about r