Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Friday, March 6, 2015

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Aggressive-looking creature
Unfound in my dictionary
Don't let him catch you
Ambling in his backyard
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Kim Barney
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Bri Edwards 11 March 2015

i think ARACHNOPHOBES beware, to be more specific. i like that you typed his backyard. cute. when will humans realize that they are (probably) the trespassers? a nice little poem. i couldn't resist the title. bri :) and nice photo.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 March 2015

Beautiful composition. Many thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 March 2015

Beautiful composition. Many thanks.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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