Monday, September 26, 2011

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I composed this poem in 1976 but still survived
Bik gayee hai yeh jami(n)
bik gaya hai asman(n)
bik gaye sare chaman
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ramesh rai
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 July 2013

Thank you for bringing my attention to this beautiful poem. I started thinking ' Jo bhi bach gaya vo bhi bik chukar.'

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Geetha Jayakumar 23 July 2013

Wonderful...write and that too of 1976..Enjoyed reading....Thanks for sharing! ! !

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Shahzia Batool 10 July 2013

bachhpan me suna zamaana pur aashob he, har daur me yehi dekha, issi lye shayd kehte hen k jo iss duniya se gya woh acchhi jagah per he, agar 1976 me yeh halaat thay lekin phir bhi aaj hum waqt me zinda hen, iss ka matlab yeh he k koi counterbalancing forces zaroor mojood hoti hen jo sustainer saabit hoti hen jessa k ap ki last lines me he...nazam achhi ho to kissi bhi daur me uss ka essence disturb nhi hota, thanks so much for sharing! ! !

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 July 2013

Ah wah poet khoob nazm, insan such bik gaya, he has to buy his soul again now. Tnx 4 yor coment too.

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