Sunday, May 15, 2011

Auction For My Heart... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our eyes met often, but our hearts never did,
I have auctioned my heart and hope you'll buy it in this life's bid...
You searched different paths, but knew not the one to mine,
How could you imagine you would have to pay a late-buy fine?
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Nidhi Dev
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Diwakar Bhatt 20 June 2011

Nice and touching.............

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Denvor Fernandez 11 June 2011

Eyes oft meet but hearts dont...I see millions of eyes moving searching for something in void...but not a single heart....We all want love but we dont know how to give it.....Good poem...they make me write all this stuff...you need to travel deeper...best of luck from a poet to a poet

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Savyasachi Singh 10 June 2011

your poem has got a voice...a voice of lovelorn soul....thanks for sharing it here...

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