Friday, May 13, 2016

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The wheels of the trolley squeak.
Her large green suitcase is lopsided,
And those on top are stuck with the trend.
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Colm Keenan
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Joseph Harlacher 13 May 2016

dear colm your observations so acutely real from page to page and line to line crosses my mind keeping time dont quit dont go away dont stop for today youve got a talent of conveyance unique to only once in a while in this poem any way

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Colm Keenan 13 May 2016

Joseph, Your feedback is a poem in itself. Much appreciated, Colm.

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