At dawn this song of love is sung,
A sweet Serenade carressing, a beauties eardrum,
Lost within the sweeness of this melody,
we slowly slip in and out of reality,
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Very touchy poetry... I like the way of using confused words and also composition of the words in this poem.... it's well written. very imaginative to make visuals in the soul of each reader..... Thumbs up...
I love this poem, its exactly what I've been through today, no joke! ! ! !
Ohw! so well written, and touching, such thought grabbing from this piece.
Ohw! so well written, and touching, such thought grabbing from this piece.
Wo0o0o0o0ow it's amazing, and so melodic, the words are chosen perfectly, a gr8 piece of work :)
I enjoyed reading this a really good poem. A really good write.
With the lines like this you hypnotising my me to read your poems again and again all over again. History repeats in itself again and again. I gain something each time I read. 'At dawn this song of love is sung, A sweet Serenade caressing, a beauties eardrum, ' So Read carpet welcome to the young poetess to walk more miles in her life if only she writes poems like this! Ha! Ha! Ha! :) :) :) :) All smile for you crimson LOVE...