Aubade Comments

Beautiful and rhythmic. I love it's flow and feeling.

Your lovely poem perfectly captures the promise of a fresh new day.

Delightful to read with all the picturesque scenes involving sounds and sights. Provides a lot of room for more fill-ins of one’s own life situation in comparison.

idylic reflections, , so lovely, , and serene, ,10

Most descrpitive of the world awakening couched in well written poetic prose The essential difference between poetry and prose is meter The acid test is to read your words aloudd if the flow like melted Ghee You are doing fine If not re -edit and rewrite until they do/Try to keep your line lenghts equal.May I suggest you obtain a good source book which explains the different meters used in poetry Lewis turcos book of forms or miller Williams patterns of poetry both available on amazon often cheaply as used copies I am an old fashioned formalist so my opinions are somewhat prejudiced Your command of english is excellent but often sentences are structired differently in english to your own languagr

Reminds me of a poem i had learned in my school days where the poet had panted the picture of a market place using words...amazing flow.

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absolutely picturesque and sonorous in tone

true...another excelent write

A vivdly written piece. Excellent.

Nice poem.I think this is an onomatopoeia.

Resh! What a perception on our surroundings! ! A true poet u are...very well written.Please read my MAN IN THE STREET and DILETTANTISH HUNGER.

...I liked it very much