Au Lac De Beratan Comments

Wow, the wave pulls light out of the sea: what an idea! 'the wave pulls light out the sky blends seamlessly with artistry among hedges of bougainvillea sensuous curves of stone statues'. This is very splendid. So poetic and artistic.

A wonderful poem..........10++++++ Love & hugs.

Well done indeed, Ahmad.This is a wonderfully constructed write. good flow and incisive wording make this a pleasure to read. The dedication is pleasingly appropriate, as well. Great work my friend. Richard

You have blanketed Fiona with loving comparisons to the beauty without and within her. You accentuated her uniqueness with delicate contrasts of precious visual delights. Beautiful. A true joy. Yes, to truly share, I shall read her poems. Carol

nice vivid write..and great poem tribute to Fiona..

An exquisite expression! Congrats!

Your style is impeccable. I haven't read Ms.Fiona. Must read now. thanks friend.

Beautifully written piece so full of imagery and a pleasure to read. Take Care, Stacey

I don't know the meaning of 'Au Lac de Beratan', yet the poem under the title is wonderful.

An elegant poem in classic pen. Such a nice tribute to Fiona. Thank you. Jim

I agree with Leslie. It takes you to a better place. It was well described. I also liked the crisp wording. No wasting of words. Technically, very good. GW62

this piece took me to a better place.

A befitting poem of appreciation for a lovely lady

A great poem my friend, which contains a wonderful bloom of freshness Best wishes Jon

A lovely poem for a lovely lady, that is the great thing about PH we get to speak to people from all over the world, well done Ahmad 10 Lynda xx

What a dedication Ahmed, good words fine stanzas.10

'A sanctuary for your sense' nicely penned brother 10