Attraction Comments

sometimes being to cautious and afraid can be lost if not made a ten

This was neat and cleanly written. It had good rhymes and it was easy to follow in meaning. This was also well constructed with the bonus of a great ending. High marks for this one. Wonderful! GW62

Wow... the poem relates the confused feelings and actions went through in the process before finding and asking someone out. the constant break and almost flippant way you proceed from one stanza and in even word by word is insync with the feelings and actions that occur... you captured the message and want well... along with your word choice, your simplicity was well written and gave notice to the way it truly is... i am glad i got to write a comment for it... no recommendations but to keep writing

nice poem men.........

This is a poem with great truth in it. You've done well!

You describe the process of body language well. It is quite a game and taking part for the end result sometimes does take courage. Interesting perceptions. Good work! Karin Anderson

The truth told in an amusing way.

Great Poem! I really enjoyed reading it.

I too agree with Sir Sharma---u r close to Paradise Lost when will you touch Paradise Regained well done Fred -10 anjali

fantastic write...I fully agree with C.P sir. 10

You have great poetic potential. First step to Paradise Lost, very well penned.10/10 CP

Very beautiful and gentle poem... Nicely writin..

nice passion match mating verses...well penned/rhymes..10

appealing, wonderful write, dear poet.. a date process you've written dramatically..

This is really sweet, and has so much honesty with it.. Attraction is an app. title. Keep up the good work..... Bonnie

What a wonderful mating process written with skills.Good job Fred.

as if ur not a beginner fred..u hve a vry nice piece..nice to read...all lines r well pennd..very beautiful...cheers, , , ths s a gud start.. naizz

A very attractive poem. Keep writing.