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Her dress floats elegantly
Under the bright lights
Of the dance floor
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Her dress floats elegantly/Under the bright lights/Of the dance floor....scintillating expression! A wonderful work worth reading time and again.....so beautifully penned! I admire your style of penning!
That are so lovely. Indeed a lovely poem.Thank u, dear poetess.
It is like simple strokes of an artist making a portrait, when completed produces a master piece. I don't think anything more needs needless words. Lovely.
Legs sway seductively/To the rhythm/Of UnchainedMelody......delightfully expressed! A brilliant work..........10
A small poem but very powerful as a romantic write! The natural attraction, a young man feels towards a beautiful girl in rhythmic motion is powerfully captured.On the dance floor, she is a marvel and so is your poem! A sure 10
Legs sway seductively To the rhythm Of UnchainedMelody. fine and real romantic poem.
Legs sway seductively To the rhythm Of UnchainedMelody........nice poetic expression. A beautiful poem with romantic expression.
unchained melody, seductive swaying..... beautiful poetic expressions.. thank u dear poetess. tony
His eyes were glued To her face Waiting to arrest her eyes That are so lovely.........this stanza justifies the title of the poem incisively. Beautiful poem.10
Thank you so much, Aldouz for your amazing comment. I feel honored.
His eyes were glued to her face! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Her dress floats elegantly Under the bright lights Of the dance floor....Lovely expression. I liked it..Thanks for sharing!
An well crafted write Rose Marie. You have visualized a pair caught in the pool of attraction. Nudershada
Thank you for your great comment, Nuder. Your visit is much appreciated.
This poem has both attraction and pathos, wonderful, thanks for sharing the poem with us
Such a wonderful comment, Muzahidul. Thank you for the visit.
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7/29/2025 11:36:37 AM # 1.0.0
And indeed I'm attracted to the dress that is so well presented and my eyes are glued at its elegance profound. Beautiful attraction.