My Eyelids Are Being Attracted
Downwards And Downwards
I’m In The Class But I’m
So Sleepy And Bored My Friend
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this shows you are a normal student....from poetry point of view, it's good that how we use our day to day experiences, n life's little n subtle things in a poetic way...this paves our path for thinking on serious issues gradually...
Oh, Arjun, you remind me of my school days - and i was even worse. this is so good, I love it. one day, school will change you, and you will change in school, and be borne on the wings of knowledge to far away places, some in your own soul. Oh, this made me laugh, for it reminds me of me. A 10, my friend.
the title itself is different, which attracted me 2 read ur poem...........its nice and simply good