The Supreme shaped the
mainland, ocean, atmosphere.
Furnished them with essentials
for the living everywhere.
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Revisiting this wonderful poem. A vivid depiction of man's weaknesses that build division and fuel hatred.
I have come to reread this scintillating poem, Dr. Dash. I have enjoyed tremendously your fisrt stanza, I cite here: The Supreme shaped the mainland, ocean, atmosphere. Furnished them with essentials for the living everywhere. Fantastic!
Respected Ma'am, Many thanks for your appreciation.I am reminded of your first comment wherein you addressed me jai hind on poem power of words.I am not at all a poet. Comments of a group of great writers in PH inspired to write more from my own experience.with my heart felt gratitude.t
Human life well analyzed throughout to give a nice ending...liked a lot...5*****
' The seeds of difference have been sown and perpetuated only by actions of man.' A very discerning line from a great poem.
Insightful lines so very true. Brilliantly crafted.
A great and meaningful message to humanity. So wonderful thoughts to ponder about.
Thank yiou so much for this lovely lecture, Sir. I have enjoyed the many many words and synonyms uttered here. Thank you for sharing, Sir
'We must learn to live together as brothers or perish together as fools'.---A great poem about the climate change that bodes dangers for the mankind.The quote sums it all.
More importantly, the conjectural approach towards modern style of living has been brilliantly delineated with scientific temper.. Hope, , this excellent work will bring impact and influence...Well done!
Having visited again your fascinating poems, I still enjoyed tremendously your poetic expressions, once you submitted here a story poem or a long verse, you will be called POET, Dr. Dash, your poems result says it all, I am still enjoying your other poems, thank you for creating and sharing