Tuesday, February 4, 2014

Attention. Elvis Alert. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was sitting at the traffic lights
and looking straight ahead;
I was pumping up the motor for
the traffic lights were red,
...
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Thomas Vaughan Jones
COMMENTS
Smoky Hoss 05 February 2014

Love it! Elvis lives, and so does your poem! It's great.

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Lorraine Colon 04 February 2014

I was absolutely wondering where he had gone. Thank you for solving the mystery in such an entertaining way.

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Oladehinde J Ibikunle 04 February 2014

This is well and skillfully narrated. It's lovely.

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Joseph Anderson 04 February 2014

Tom-go to Vegas for your next wedding, Elvis will perform it. This was gut busting hilarious, almost believable- a real fun write and so well done -10 for the laughter

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