Sunday, December 10, 2006

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Rating: 5.0

I want for you to notice me
And that is why I bleed.
I want for you to be with me
but I cannot succeed.
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Jessica Anonymous
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Titi Dale 30 March 2013

This is a captivating poem that kept me reading all the way :) it is a sad story but a wonderful write from a wonderful poet. Keep writing! ~Titi

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Inki Chae 12 June 2010

best poem I've ever seen way better than that Maya Angelou. Very wonderful yet so sad a 10 without a doubt

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William Budhi Subiyanto 23 October 2008

I JUST WANT TO SAY: G B U! ! ! I HOPE I CAN TO GET HER TO BE MY WIFE

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

A wonderful composition. So touchy! 10 added to it.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 August 2008

This poem stirred me! I clicked 10 best wishes

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Sarah Mustang 10 August 2008

Tears formed as I read this poem. It stabbed me right through the heart. Beautifully writted yet tragically sad.

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Ashley Davis 28 June 2008

Wow...very passionate! I like it alot!

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Stacy S 15 February 2007

Oh...My....God....That is beautiful......

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Holly Heron 20 December 2006

that was astonishing, captivating in its sad beauty

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Joshua Fegley 10 December 2006

Lost for words on this one Jessica...............

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