Attempt To Get Cool.. Comments

I like to read stuff like this. Not because its sensuous, but because it makes you feel good about living. Beautifully done . GW62

This is a really good poem. I have to agree with my good friend Allie.

This poem has a distinctively Australian feel to it - the ancient gum tree and the old carved river. Yes the Aussie summer sun is certainly seductive and the music in the distance of your narrative adds emotional color to this sensuous write. love, Allie xxxx