Attaractive Bay And Firing Range Poem by Chaminda Pushpadewa

Attaractive Bay And Firing Range

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Greenforest on the hill, which is silent with the morning sun
Gesture that was showed up like pleasure calm that made up gestation
Gathering that deer groupthey were playing squirreling with simian
Gifting this nature to either fauna or human

The birds it hidden among the leaves and it was shoutedcontinue
The mina andpigeon were flown upon the seashore
The deer had not moved to their beach but it watches that scene on some time
The lagoon seawater is not moving for their seashore

Blowing that wind across the bay and over the trees
Boat, Ship, and jot were floating from the power of wind on several hours
Blank atmosphere has decorated leaf shadows
Background will be attractive for the portrait by painters

Lovers of motherland they named soldiers who fire the gun on their range
Lieutenant was bided to them that proper stance and accurate aim that might be
Lagoon had not an idea that sounded bang, bang on that time
Loathing that sounded of bang they have inserted earplugs for themselves ears

Tuesday, July 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: gun,lesson,natural,war
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 24 July 2018

Blowing that wind across the bay and over the trees Boat, Ship, and jot were floating from the power of wind on several hours Blank atmosphere has decorated leaf shadows - the last stanza say clearly of war and the terror and sense of loss, fear, guns and its roar........ thank u for this expressive poem.. tony

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