There is nothing like
being pelted by Heaven's
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This is really cute. I enjoyed it very much, and appreciate the amount of work that you must have put into it!
.such a delightful poem...........thanks for sharing it with us.........
How delightful! Such a pleasure to read...even now! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Hi Lorraine - Nice to meet a California Girl also nice to find a fellow Hiakuist! I am posting one about the months of the years. I like Haikus in bundles - one can write a real story. Well done 10.
This is such a lovely poem! brilliant, brilliant brilliant!
Lorraine, this is so beautiful, Your imagery was tops. i could see and sence the cold little boogers on my nose and cheeks.Oh so pretty 10
Yes, I totally agree with you! ! Writen with much imagery... Bonnie
Hah! You took the sentiments right out of head. Wonderful, whimsical! !
I appreciate your distaste for winter at this time of year and your sense of humor. Some very original and creative thoughts.
" being pelted by Heaven's. dizzy frozen tears" ... Such phrases are unforgettable, and they aptly convey your dismay. They make me feel as if I'm looking skyward as whirling flakes fall straight into my eyes. To my Favorites List!