Monday, March 9, 2009

Attack Of The Snowflakes Haiku Comments

Rating: 4.9

There is nothing like

being pelted by Heaven's
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
COMMENTS
Denis Mair 13 January 2020

" being pelted by Heaven's. dizzy frozen tears" ... Such phrases are unforgettable, and they aptly convey your dismay. They make me feel as if I'm looking skyward as whirling flakes fall straight into my eyes. To my Favorites List!

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Practicing Poetess 28 August 2017

This is really cute. I enjoyed it very much, and appreciate the amount of work that you must have put into it!

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Yash Shinde 03 April 2014

.such a delightful poem...........thanks for sharing it with us.........

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 15 July 2011

How delightful! Such a pleasure to read...even now! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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John Knight 28 August 2009

Hi Lorraine - Nice to meet a California Girl also nice to find a fellow Hiakuist! I am posting one about the months of the years. I like Haikus in bundles - one can write a real story. Well done 10.

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Rosalita Fernandez 11 April 2009

This is such a lovely poem! brilliant, brilliant brilliant!

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Myrtle Thomas 22 March 2009

Lorraine, this is so beautiful, Your imagery was tops. i could see and sence the cold little boogers on my nose and cheeks.Oh so pretty 10

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Meggie Gultiano 22 March 2009

a nice haiku.wish i can write like this

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 21 March 2009

Wonderful haikus. A gift of winter indeed.

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Bonnie Collins 17 March 2009

Yes, I totally agree with you! ! Writen with much imagery... Bonnie

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Pablo Cruise 16 March 2009

Hah! You took the sentiments right out of head. Wonderful, whimsical! !

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Omar Ibrahim 15 March 2009

wonderful...i hope i will writelike this when i grow up! ! !

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Ben Gieske 12 March 2009

I appreciate your distaste for winter at this time of year and your sense of humor. Some very original and creative thoughts.

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