Atrophic Nature Of Mine Shall Someday Change Course Comments

I can honestly say this poem has touched me more that any other poem I have read. I guess it's because I can see myself in that same scene where you're battling that 'beast' that never dies. Thank you very much! Izzey Strange

i FRIFFIN LOVE it! ! the way this was written usin that back-in-the-day english....AWESOME! ! (i liked how they spoke back then) xP

Wow and you thought that I was good.Gods you make me look like an amatuer, especially with you throwing the old english around like your from the 1500's! ! ! !

this is really good too. I like it a lot. I perceived a beast that could not be named, In thy accursèd nature wh’ art not be tamed, For this beast be shown with such beauteous flair, May those mortals be damned who not did dare To attempt to defile with thine worst intentions Of glory and wonder in thine first pretention, Contrast aims of others signed to selfless intent To defile the beast without signs of repent, On the fence did I lie with my weakest force That I brought to defeat in my sorest discourse, this is really discriptive and i can really feel the emotion.