Atonement Broken (A Love Tale Of Menaka And Vishwamitra) Comments

Years has passed! But, you still have hope ahead. Nice work.

What did move Vishwamitra is untold and I don't agree with any pleading. You have crafted very nicely. In fact it is tough to depict a story in a poetic articulation. My Sita is still incomplete and hope to complete shortly. Your endeavor is always praiseworthy. Keep it up. Marks - 10

beautiful poem. vishwamitra and Menaka. and the graphic is so wonderful. gave you a big 10

I don't know Sanskirit but I have read translation of Abhigyan Shakuntlam. The way you have started the story is beautiful and amazing. Happy to read that it will continue. I expect many more beautiful poems like this. I have started thinking whether you will and how you will describe the union of Shakuntla and Dushyant after gandharva Vivah. It's not difficult for a poet but you are a poetess from the east. It will be interesting to see whether you ignore it or you boldly describe it. And if you describe it I hope it will be the most artistic chapter of this long poem. My well wishes are with you.

Verily, a good narration........10 Loved reading it

Superb, the untold story in your own words, waiting for part 2........Liked it, nice flow with great imagery.