Atonement Comments

Very mysterious and mystical write dear uncle. I am decepted by the fore lines of the write but on knowing the intent that the culprit is loved most I got the heart of the writer. Wonderful. But I understood it in another way too uncle!

a very soulfully romantic piece....well done sathya

A robbery of the heart, it can only be atonement. Bob

a 10 for this fine composition.........thanks

I can't think of any words that give this poem the justice it deserves, except...Wow! Such beauty.

a well vivid concepts....well done...

A beautifully executed word picture. Well done Sathya. Poetry if surely for the full and satisfied life whereever we live. Keep up your production. Greetings from Cornwall U.K.

totally legal but there is beauty of verse..this is an interesting write and a well composed one, it is different and sylish..10 Rema

This is the world we are living in-a nice poem.

The theft of the heart is the most heinous crime but has no punishment whatsoever. How smartly you have written this small yet sweet poem. best wishes, arya

one of a kind poem, very meaningful. good writer.........thanks

very well penned. likede it a lot.

Just beautiful! Enjoyed reading it: D Will come back for more!

It is not the 'gift' from outside of us that rewards. It is that which is dicovered when one 'ATONES' to that which comes through self examination. I enjoy your poem.

Deep insight and said with beautiful words.... it works perfectly

satya, you present this romantic 'case' very smartly in this lovely piece... i liked...10

A very well written poe and delightful to read, good work. Loyd