Atlas Poem by Neera Lollbeeharry

Atlas

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At the edge of the plain,
In an unfitting frame,
Stood all bent, a mighty giant.

He had dared to rebel,
And was now condemned,
To bear the sky on his shoulders.

His legs all crumpled
His shoulders in pulps
His chest all bloodied and hurt,

He stood all lonely
In scraggly defeat
And bore the eternal load.

The burden ever piling,
His arms tense, trembling,
He felt all crushed and spent.

But no Heracles came,
To relieve his massive pain.
Nor was reprieve his fill-in lot.

His life was all subdued
Into timeless servitude
And he had no right to shrug.

Atlas
Tuesday, September 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: melancholic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 06 September 2016

His life was all subdued Into timeless servitude And he had no right to shrug...injustices as a symbol which destroys human being......... you have used the symbol very well and it is expressive and it conveys....... thank you dear poetess

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