Atlantis Comments

heavy :) deep and nice one. I like the character of Miss in the poem (strong and patient) also the style of expression is nice. :) and so too must you nice

Wish great times ahead! Well done!

wow! ! ..now the poem is amazing...nd it reminds of the scene in 2012 where the president decides to stay wit the people..ur usage of words is simple nd apt.. u have used NAUGHT instead of NOTHING...that gives it a poetic touch..most of al, I loved the last stanza of the poem.! ! ! .

Hey Shyam, Basically Atlantis is like a parallel poem to a book I've written by the same name which hasn't been published yet. I think of this as the Queen of Atlantis speaking about her country as it sinks into the sea.. according to the legend there was a huge earthquake/volcano which triggered a tsunami around the end of the last ice age, and the combination destroyed the land of Atlantis. In my book, the people know about this in advance, & they plan to evacuate. But the Queen says that she wants to stay on and die with her land, because she loves it so much. One of her advisors tells her she should save herself, because however much she loves the land, it's dead while her people are still living, and she has a duty to them. That's the conversation in this poem, between the Queen and her advisor. The philosophical undercurrent is that nothing is completely dead and gone as long as the memory remains. Hope I cleared it up :) Thanks for asking! :) Thanks a lot for saying all those nice things! :) Priya.

hey, By reading others comments on this, I guess this poem is superb..but seriously i was not able to make the meaning of it..ur proving ur a pacca literature student..if u find some time, pls explain me the meaning of the poem in brief..tamila sonna nalladu: -) : -) .. .pls read ma poems too and comment on them..KEEP GOING...ur nowhere far from becoming a GR8 poetess. coz gr8 poets write in such a way that a common man like me cud not understand..just kidding, .: -) . regards, shyam.

Nicely written Liked what u wanted to say Liked ur poem Keep rocking \m/

such a nice poem here! so very nice piece well done there luwi

fine wording! fantastic! 10+

This is a creative piece, beautifully written.

very interesting and meaningul poem. voted10 surya

amazing! ..thrs no other wrd i cn think of -there are many feelings behind the curtian which u hav tried to tell with a gud use of characters-i appreciate the thought flow.! gud one MSC

a song of the lost to the lost..........

A good one Priya...........

a NOBLE AND GOSPEL WRITES pRIYA.Well done.

To be truthful with you, every body loves literature!

Lovely verses! A literary treat indeed! Fabulous!

You have done the right thing by choosing literature, keep penning many more good ones like this

Great dialogues here well written poem...........Loved It! ! !

There are others too that die, Sir, You too will one day pass – But let none say you never were, You never shared a laugh; For in that day, most noble Lord, It will be true, you'll be lost, And the years you'd lived on earth, my Lord, Will be gone, by all forgot. Enigmatic piece.........love atlantis tooo..... good poem Priya

Nice write!