Saturday, April 11, 2020

Atlantis. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hidden in the dim light
Tops of submerged buildings
Stood above the water
Bodies scattered like flotsam
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Tom Allport
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Yoonoos Peerbocus 11 April 2020

bodies scattered like floatsam wonderful line and piece

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 April 2020

last night was in the dark Atlanis but daybreak right now no more... not found anywhere superb imaginative

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Clive Culverhouse 11 April 2020

Always enjoy reading about Atlantis I think it will be found one day, there lots of ocean out there

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Sandra Feldman 11 April 2020

With sadness but perfectly written. The whole picture appears with just a few words. The poetic brevity so well chosen, is able to, remarkably and vividly, present the tragedy with just a few excellent verses.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 April 2020

" Atlantis" Was no more Never to be found....Daybreak brought up a mystery and all were surprised. This poem is very brilliantly and excellently penned.

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