1. FAITH
“I’ve been having these
awful dreams, each a little different,
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.....truly amazing....micharl's dream is a thought provoking write ★ lucky we don't have to know what something is in order to hold it
Yawn...! Usual drivel. Sounds like another passage of a book or article thats been broken up so that it looks like poetry. Rearrange it and see if you don't think the same. Sorry Mark, not my cup of tea, I'm afraid. Having taught poetry, I did, on one occasion, take the first part of a noted book, re-set it and pass it off as a poem. Hilarious but sad that it was accepted as such.
I really liked this. I read comments below that indicated someone didn't care for it at all. That is okay. Writing can speak to some and not the other. It's not easy to get a grip on this and make it sit or lie down- it wants to take off after a new scent. I happened to like the different destinations and the different stories going on there.