Wednesday, October 20, 2004

Atlantic Waves Comments

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Perched upon sandy beach
crabs dig into earth's crust
pelicans dive as if to imitate war heroes
dolphins glide through waters untamed
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Gary Scott Gebert
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Linda Preston 27 March 2005

nice metaphor about the pelicans. Shades of Philip Larkin in closing lines of last stanza - interesting.

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