Monday, February 4, 2008

Athletic Endeavor Comments

Rating: 4.1

Once more it begins
My mind focused
On the task
at hand
...
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Mary Havran
COMMENTS
Roger Cornish 16 February 2008

Always... always br-ea-th-le-ss wh-en re-ad-in-g Ma-ry's Po-et-ry... Sh-'s ju-st do-es th-at to me! *Grabs rail for support* Rogerx

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Mable Wumblie 14 February 2008

I was picturing an athlete right up to the last part, but then there are many types of heroism.

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Emancipation Planz 13 February 2008

Excuse (and thank you for) the plagarism due to the exhaustion of mental exercise.... love/hate; love/hate this! ! ! !

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What Angie said. And.... admiration. t x

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To Windward 10 February 2008

Mary, I love this.... it had me willing you on to the last. I wonder if I might reproduce this in our local MS Newsletter, would this be OK with you? Rob

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David Harris 07 February 2008

Mary, no matter how defeated you feel about such hurdles and I know quite a number of people in predicaments such as these. No one is a failure as long as they try. Another brilliant poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. David

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Fredi Staire 05 February 2008

People should work to make things more accessible. Thanks for writing of it.

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