Monday, September 5, 2005

Athena Comments

Rating: 4.3

Pallid you may be; Athena, Pallas,
Was wise too, pale because she knew too much
About her lover's quite elusive phallus
Whenever she came near and wished to touch.
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Linda Hepner
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David Gerardino 12 September 2006

ok, read it 2 times, great poem....................................

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Ben Banda 16 November 2005

Hey Lindy! i was away but today, i have fallen back with Athena AIRLINER to Athens may be. I wish i were a character in this piece; and why isn't this piece on the top 500 or top TEN on our POEMHUNTER.COM? or has my eyes ceased to.........! Anyway, shoot another hot one to me Linda.

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Raynette Eitel 05 September 2005

This is very well crafted, Linda...with a consistent rhyme and meter. The subject is unusal and you have given us a glimpse into another time. Good poem. Raynette

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