Tuesday, September 13, 2011

Athena Comments

Rating: 4.5

I can't forget the song of yesterday, her eyes,
Never to be seen by mine, wont yet shalln't define,
Blessed Athena perched, mayhap a serpent in twine,
Blisters her hair in shine, ember as the flame cries;
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Jay Bradley
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Allemagne Roßmann 17 September 2011

Great song sung by you in Athena`s vespered twilight...great tribute to the history and its statistics what it unfolds for you the verses u have jotted here.Absolutely mindblowing synaptic write as hymns to the sea leading to Athena

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Jhanessa Aiden 14 September 2011

words are used much in a figurative sense... what a gift...

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Johann Mitterhauser 13 September 2011

i liked the strong structure! ! good job!

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