Saturday, January 21, 2012

Atheist At A Bus Stop Comments

Rating: 5.0

A young man look at his hand and cogitate
a woman said, why your hand?
Young men replied it is Art.
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Makhosonke Dhlamini
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eloida Capuno 20 December 2012

Thank you for this wonderful poem, you crafted it beautifully. And thanks for reading and commenting on my work.

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Hans Vr 10 April 2012

What a great poem. It is art, it is God art. And then the woman realising and than all of us readers realising, what a wonderful and strong message to all humans.

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Wabi Sabi 09 April 2012

god is with you. you are of god too.

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Unwritten Soul 09 April 2012

A dimensional writing, it's creative and a good vision on it...We can see the nature force alone cant make this incredible art in our body and heart...how can people explain the chemical reaction with feelings, if we cant what chemical we need to kill the pain...to make people be more humanity for this age...why nature make it happen, the answer is no...not by nature because we are the art and our Creator is artist with no challenge, it pour physique and soul..nice write buddy! _Unwritten Soul

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Young Church Poetry 17 February 2012

All beautiful things and wonders are a mirror of God. Beautiful theme Ntate Dhlamini.

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Young Church Poetry 17 February 2012

All beautiful things and wonders are a mirror of God. Beautiful theme Ntate Dhlamini.

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Jacqui Broad 26 January 2012

Beauty sure does come from inside. A rather beautiful poem. Thanks for invite.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 25 January 2012

Your presentation is good, deep, rather beautiful and I see the bus goes!

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Pheko Motaung 25 January 2012

Hi tiger.This is a good poem.Well done

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David Gerardino 22 January 2012

read it a few times, not really sure if i like the poem/story or not, still a good read.

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Wahab Abdul 22 January 2012

the story of the poem has a crafty plot which i like the best...other qualities of the poem is its presentation...flow is another quality.....the theme of the is as ancient as the human being and universal too that is the expressing gratitude to the almighty god...thanks for sharing..pl.give a visit to my other poems

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Dave Walker 22 January 2012

Like it, a great poem, good write.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 21 January 2012

Wow! man, this is poetry at its best..it shows pure talend and wisdom of the writer..awesome stuff mfana wasemzini..

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Ernest Makuakua 21 January 2012

I am in love with the poem. great words khosi. Keep going its great insight to the mind inspiration to the heart motivation to the eyes. Reality to life

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Binish Cd 21 January 2012

a thought provoking poem.......showing beauty through its transparent veil............

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