Wednesday, May 20, 2020

At Work He Craves For More Shopping Comments

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At work he craves for more shopping
And getting high in Mall hopping
He fills his world with Leisure
Until he throws up in seizures
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Kevin Patrick
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Liked the ultimate stanza. Very incisive. A vivid portrayal of how democracy works at these times of uncertainty. A brilliant write as always, Kevin.

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A very astute observation on people's behavior. I concur with your perceptive and brilliant thoughts. Yes, there are many people who want to shop and shop. They are shopaholics. They just purchase things as if there is no tomorrow. Sometimes they just hoard mindless of those people who are deprived of the opportunity to buy their needs.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 May 2020

He craves for more shopping and having more hopping. Increasing rate of production and sale encourages him a lot. Their rights for consumption is kept in mid with respect to production. Lady liberty dances on the edge of a cliff. This poem is very amazingly penned. I put my historic 40,190th comment (my Forty thousands one hundred and ninety comment)

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