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superb rhymaticy quality to all your poems keith...line after line flows so well...excellent work.. :) tom

Another excellent work Keith. It aptly describes the inward battle against the yearnings of the flesh. To have the wisdom to know if we yield to what comes natural, we will only have to answer to our own sorrow later on. Well done!

Like the way you have put across the idea of the journey within. Reminds me of Johnathan Livingston Seagull

You may have to face yourself again but don't you think it would have been worth the try. Even if you fail, you at least tried. Lovely work.10/10

The lesson is all inside and it seems to me from this erudite piece that you have learned it..... t x

the mind is the teacher and the disciple both...its willingness to teach and to learn...one can go places...good write, keith 10

good read, interesting style