Tuesday, June 12, 2012

At Waters Edge Comments

Rating: 5.0

At waters edge we dared the night,
to hold the moment, never end.
To hold back dawns encroaching light,
and count each second...saviour..friend.
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Perry Biggerstaff
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Amanda Laurent 06 October 2013

Such great flow to this poem, and the excitement of something new is palpable. I especially loved the line, That time would fan what started burning - true artistry.

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