Monday, February 18, 2008

At War With Yourself Comments

Rating: 4.0

I have lost all control over my soul
They won the war as my drugs take hold
I do as I’m told, engulfed in my demons victory
It feels so good could this be but trickery?
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Kaspa Richards
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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 October 2008

A beautiful composition. Love it.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 March 2008

you have to believe in yourself. outcast the demons once and for all!

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Fred Babbin 18 February 2008

Not a perfect poem, but you express your problem very well.

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Kaspa Richards

Kaspa Richards

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