At War Comments

Restrained writing style which is best for rising above the immediate carnage to envision the future effects..lots of skill in this one. (smile)

War is a man made catasthrope and we all knew it so well.Great job Sandra.

War is a fascinating word for me, and your poetry is fascinatingly agonising, a task it set out to achieve.

A vivd picture of war, mans inhumanity to man goes on and on. Well said well written.

The sound of guns Could be heard everywhere There was no immediate hope of peace.......yes all attempts for war bring misery and catstrophies.. estrution everywhere.......10 read mine 'banvelont dictator' and matryres

a pensive expression beatifull done. shan

heart felt conviction put in such nice lines howsoever distant i stand in the envelope of the whirlpool.. but strangely we stand on the same side of the fence very nicely penned cheers

'There never was a good war or a bad peace' Benzamin Franklin A good poem, thought provoking poem on war.

There is no peace before and after war! Horrible Indeed!

be it run any where in the world war will bring only destruction and decay, material mental moral and physical to humanity...good write on the evils of war there, Sandra...10

u have painted it very well..very! amazing and wonderful work uv pictured it so vividly u have a beautiful mind and as are u dear friend

Good write Well done

The flow and the point have been very well taken, A great write of what fighting can do to us.10++

Strong write here Sandra...excellent read...10+++

iT CREATES AN aura of war.........a jaw of masculinity.I like it coz' myself from maritime and martial background.A 10 for you from a warrior.

avoidable..yet no body really want to..leave alone killing and heaping bodies, evenfrightening or overpowering a neighbour is a shame to humanity