The stick slipped,
He was about to fall,
But his crony crutch supported him
With her fragile frame.
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A magnificent poem at Vuda Park. The superb use of the phrases like, "fragile frame", ‘waiting eyes' and ‘unintended glance' among others makes this poem downrightly poetic and majestic. A beautiful composition…..appreciated.
A piece of verse that can rightly boast of apt and powerful diction, immaculate style and the much needed personal touch indeed! Well begun over here and I wish you all the best ahead sir. Thanks for your kind comments.
Thank you, Dinesh Nair. This poem was actually written many years ago.
A piece of verse that can rightly boast of apt and powerful diction, immaculate style and the much needed personal touch indeed! Well begun over here and I wish you all the best ahead sir. Thanks for your kind comments.
The ambience and the underlying emotions have been expressed beautifully.
Thank you, Ms Nayak.