Sunday, February 15, 2009

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On that day when you gallantly got up,
And started engraving with knife our names,
On the trunk of the shady silver oak tree,
With boyish charm, as if playing a game…
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Vidi Writes 05 May 2009

A mind that understands the life and its values Feels the palpitation of even a stone. Its love of life that gives us, all clues Splendid gesture of poet, i place a crown. A lot to learn and enjoy in this write. Thank you for sharing.

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Vaibhav Pandey 24 February 2009

ma'm....this is a brilliant poem.....very expressive

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Raj Nandy 19 February 2009

The last para makes the poem soar to great heights! That being one of the main purpose of all good poetry! 10! Our famous Indian scientist Jagadish Bose- had proved that trees also posses a few human-like qualities! I saw this demonstration during my student days in his North Calcutta residence -converted into a science museum! After all, God created those trees long before He thought of creating us! - Raj Nandy

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Sathyanarayana M V S 17 February 2009

Mamtaji, You see what many cannot see! Those unfathomable depths are within your reach, of love, sentiment, beauty, imagery, what not! ! !

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Rani Turton 16 February 2009

This was lovely. The words brought the scene in front of our eyes.

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