Sunday, January 30, 2022

At Times I've Imagined... Comments

Rating: 5.0

The maple tree as like, a subtle artist it's
arm's a paintbrush reaching high, to paint
colors into the back ground of the skies. The
birch is timid and bright, yet gracious in it's
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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 31 January 2022

Fabulous poem. It has impeccable storyline that can touch any tender heart..5*****

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 31 January 2022

Fabulous poem. It has an impeccable flow with a storyline that can touch any tender heart.5***

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 January 2022

4) all I said to you come from my deepest inside. I thank you so much for this finest human rendition of these remarkable trees, God's greatest Blessings for you and your loved family, from your friend the slow reader Sylvia

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 January 2022

3) Dear Becca, for you the composer of this scintillating mid-rhyming poem, the highest point of 5 Stars fully at TOP and I have read a very impressive poem of your golden heart, a jewel, a gem,

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 January 2022

With 'mid-rhyming' poem, I meant Internal rhyming poem, thank you for your lovly attention, Becca.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 January 2022

2) we see these trees here in the poem daily, but we pass them by, from now on through this very beautiful poem, I will always stop and think, that softens my every day rhythm.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 January 2022

Beautiful poem, so sparkling the trees mentioned here, what a complete poem for every day cycle, how carefully the metaphors are placed after the correct nouns,

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 30 January 2022

This poem has a tenderness I needed Thank U

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 January 2022

Tender expression. Beautiful as usual...5 stars

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