The maple tree as like, a subtle artist it's
arm's a paintbrush reaching high, to paint
colors into the back ground of the skies. The
birch is timid and bright, yet gracious in it's
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Fabulous poem. It has an impeccable flow with a storyline that can touch any tender heart.5***
4) all I said to you come from my deepest inside. I thank you so much for this finest human rendition of these remarkable trees, God's greatest Blessings for you and your loved family, from your friend the slow reader Sylvia
3) Dear Becca, for you the composer of this scintillating mid-rhyming poem, the highest point of 5 Stars fully at TOP and I have read a very impressive poem of your golden heart, a jewel, a gem,
With 'mid-rhyming' poem, I meant Internal rhyming poem, thank you for your lovly attention, Becca.
2) we see these trees here in the poem daily, but we pass them by, from now on through this very beautiful poem, I will always stop and think, that softens my every day rhythm.
Beautiful poem, so sparkling the trees mentioned here, what a complete poem for every day cycle, how carefully the metaphors are placed after the correct nouns,
Fabulous poem. It has impeccable storyline that can touch any tender heart..5*****