At Times I've Imagined... Poem by Rebecca Navarre

At Times I've Imagined...

Rating: 5.0


The maple tree as like, a subtle artist it's
arm's a paintbrush reaching high, to paint
colors into the back ground of the skies. The
birch is timid and bright, yet gracious in it's
strife, as it shares it's bark, for writers to write.
And the willow like a child, tender, shy, longing
to be needed, and mild. The heart filled towering
pine, spreading it's protective arms, to shelter
smaller animals of all kinds. The apple tree growing
in it's gentle beauty and splendor, sharing it's fruits,
with her attender. The elm tree kinda like an umbrella,
romantically branching over a gal and her fella. The
catalpa tree as an elderly woman or man, with so many
stories to tell, all so very grand. And last but not least, the
mighty oak like a mindful chief, standing strong watching
over the forest, as all peacefully sleeps.

Sunday, January 30, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: trees,nature,fun,imaginings
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by MKR and nature.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 30 January 2022

Tender expression. Beautiful as usual...5 stars

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 30 January 2022

This poem has a tenderness I needed Thank U

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 January 2022

Beautiful poem, so sparkling the trees mentioned here, what a complete poem for every day cycle, how carefully the metaphors are placed after the correct nouns,

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 31 January 2022

Fabulous poem. It has impeccable storyline that can touch any tender heart..5*****

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 31 January 2022

Fabulous poem. It has an impeccable flow with a storyline that can touch any tender heart.5***

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 January 2022

4) all I said to you come from my deepest inside. I thank you so much for this finest human rendition of these remarkable trees, God's greatest Blessings for you and your loved family, from your friend the slow reader Sylvia

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 January 2022

3) Dear Becca, for you the composer of this scintillating mid-rhyming poem, the highest point of 5 Stars fully at TOP and I have read a very impressive poem of your golden heart, a jewel, a gem,

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 January 2022

With 'mid-rhyming' poem, I meant Internal rhyming poem, thank you for your lovly attention, Becca.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 January 2022

2) we see these trees here in the poem daily, but we pass them by, from now on through this very beautiful poem, I will always stop and think, that softens my every day rhythm.

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