At Times I Wish…… Comments

This poem captures the angst perfectly and form-wise it is also excellent. Maybe more images and metaphors etc could be used in another piece to capture your feelings.

At times I wish I could read more poems just like this

You have poetry, and your words sings....Keep going

beautiful, very impresive

beautifly written great poem! ! !

I enjoyed this one it really speaks to me ive been in a similar predicament more metaphorical than actual but i really do like it

WOW you have what it takes it really moved me! ♥ it is so sorrry i am speechless now: O You're amazing, perfect, great, poet♥ ♥

extrodinary poem. it describes emotions really well, i just hope you don't truely feel like this poems tone sounds because you write so wonderfully

You are apoet of high emotion. Very constructive in creative field. But you should pick up the objects scattered in the universe of different colous, shapes, tastes. Good Bye i.s. God be with you. You will cross a long field of life with proud and honour So write the poetry of life to struggle and to enjoy with different dimensions. Thank you...write more.....live long........ Apoet