Friday, May 28, 2010

At Times I Wish…… Comments

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At times I wish, I could just run and never come back. At times I think I wish I could be invisible or be in disguise.
No matter what happens. I still have these feelings inside me and it is killing me softly.
All I want to do is close my eyes and pass peacefully.
I see the pain I cause you, with every tear I shed.
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Lucia Domingos Fula
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Richard Harries 01 October 2010

This poem captures the angst perfectly and form-wise it is also excellent. Maybe more images and metaphors etc could be used in another piece to capture your feelings.

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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 19 June 2010

At times I wish I could read more poems just like this

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Anees Rahman 11 June 2010

You have poetry, and your words sings....Keep going

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Prasetya Utama 11 June 2010

beautiful, very impresive

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Benjamin Coomer 03 June 2010

beautifly written great poem! ! !

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Elias Barcelona 02 June 2010

I enjoyed this one it really speaks to me ive been in a similar predicament more metaphorical than actual but i really do like it

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Michelle Al G 28 May 2010

WOW you have what it takes it really moved me! ♥ it is so sorrry i am speechless now: O You're amazing, perfect, great, poet♥ ♥

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Bethacca Bigelly 28 May 2010

extrodinary poem. it describes emotions really well, i just hope you don't truely feel like this poems tone sounds because you write so wonderfully

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Pranab K Chakraborty 28 May 2010

You are apoet of high emotion. Very constructive in creative field. But you should pick up the objects scattered in the universe of different colous, shapes, tastes. Good Bye i.s. God be with you. You will cross a long field of life with proud and honour So write the poetry of life to struggle and to enjoy with different dimensions. Thank you...write more.....live long........ Apoet

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