Friday, October 27, 2006

At Times Am Overwhelmed Comments

Rating: 4.5

at times am overwhelmed
about nothing
just sitting there alone
by the lagoon
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Jason 3000AD
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Ifedayo Oshin 19 September 2007

i like the story of the poem and your tone, Kibaati! it is real and those of us who have been there before can relate with it, . nice piece! more, poems please! ! !

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alice sunderland 31 October 2006

nice one son! last line is a good ending. liked it.

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