Saturday, January 20, 2018

At Times Comments

Rating: 5.0

A plant with leaves open to the air and wind
Indelible by rain, occupies the mind in a
Sweet refrain, signalling oh so green
Wavering, waving, fear nothing
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Doris Cornago
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Doris Cornago 20 January 2018

I'm sorry for this glitch which caused the K to be misaligned. I've tried many times to correct but this app chose to maintain such a disfigured K. Just imagine it's a perfect K with these words separate Hoarding and Of your time. There's supposed to be a pause, a recall, a recollection and absolution, before proceeding to the next lines.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 January 2018

Doris, such a heartwarming poem...10+++

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Doris Cornago 20 January 2018

Hi Bro. Bernard. Love is meant to be comfortably warm, not hot, but never lukewarm. Don't fall into this trap of wanting something safe.: -)

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