Tuesday, March 20, 2018

At The Waiting Hall Comments

Rating: 5.0

At the waiting hall, across the bars
of vision and railings cold
she saw a limpid pond
in his cool eyes,
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Perdita Young (Hanna Wang)
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Nudershada Cabanes 23 March 2018

A beautifully crafted poem Perdita.I love the last stanza. Superb. 10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 March 2018

A marvelous poem beautifully crafted. Very touching lines. Yes, loss sometimes lingers in our mind and heart.10

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Shakil Ahmed 20 March 2018

Destiny and life walk side by side, nice idea, you have painted your passion very well, thanks

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