Monday, June 15, 2009

At The Vaal River Comments

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At the Vaal river finches twitter
and nests hang all over the willow trees
and the fishermen
sit from dusk next to the water,
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Gert Strydom
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Cindy Kreiner Sera 17 June 2009

Tranquillity and peace erase the noise of everyday rush and one can just lay back and feel sorry for these flashing cars and stressed drivers, all too soon we are them...still, we have the memories of a quiet time at the river. Lovely write

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Rory Hudson 15 June 2009

This poem evokes a sense of peace and slowness, and nature is well portrayed. Nice work.

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
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