At The Temple Comments

Theses are time tested remedies, I have long ago given up going to the temples.10

a typical female mind devotion, articulated. shan

In compliance in coherence, your soul with the smelling providence to the Lord's feet..'One from god, another from me'..means a lot...outstanding verses Seema

contemplative! a pilgrimage to inner humble manner! gorgeous! keep writing!

Seema, this is a great poem! I have loved it very much! 20/10! -Raj Nandy

Have you read this Hindi poetess- Mahadevi Varma or Subhadrakumari Chauhan- don't exactly remember- who wrote these following lines? 'Poojaa aur poojaapaa prabhuvar, issi poojaarin ko samjho Dhaan dhakshinaa aur ninjavar issi bhikhaarin ko samjho'... your poem led me to the memory of those great lines...thanks for sharing your good poem, Seema...good content well presented...10

Seema the merciful.............thats the word for you.Nice writes dear.

marvellous! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! do draw my attention, will u?

Excellent poem......every word worth gold.....the ending is superb. Kudos to you Seema......to be frank...........I never liked any poem as much as this.....so well worded, structured........I have no words to explain

This is a really a terrific poem Seema. Very powerful (particularly the third stanza) . Well done.10+