At The School Of Sternness Comments

wonderful....concept humour and smileworthy confession....tyvm :)

Love has sent many a young aspirant on his premature and reluctant academic decline, a sad tale or yore, but at least he got to reveal his lot, before expulsion beyond school's door.

Chuck, They had to know that you would be, a walking, talking travesty - - - At that age, love to be expected, it mellowed you and all your views, before you even knew what happened ... you became a human! That was a good place to flunk out of ! B.V.A.

Funny one here...and great too... thanx for sharing peace **KoNi**

and none dare throw you out for whistling coz you are in love! ! ! ...great...thanks for the laugh...love...nalini

First class (hhahahahah geddit?) yeah, sorry...10 from me. Hugs Anna xxx

Ya big softee ye! Ye'll be pullin the petals aff o floowers next! Danny

I can just imagine the mischevious 'twinkle in your eye'! 10 for originality and your trademark wordplay. Loved this stanza: 'when we did the lesson on '20 Different Sneers' I descended into trouble for laughing down the stares' - Brilliant! Loved the unexpected ending too.Justine

glaring errors? double entendre at its best

Chuck, hey! ! ! This is a great piece of fanciful originality, bringing smiles with every line. The ending is perfect, a real surprise given the setting but not the happy protagonist! Way to go! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Est: ]

Charles...I love this one. There's something slightly Harry Potterish about it. I can just picture you being the class clown! Nicely written (as always!) Hugs, Dee